i like it, nice work... can you bring up the levels on the natural sound (conversations etc) during the pauses in the interviews?... also, i want to see people interacting and having fun as they put on the lotions and play with the products (in a non-explicit manner)... too much footage of people walking and standing around... get to the fun part... the toys!
Hey Charles and I are in the lab working on video too. He just showed me your draft.
Hey Chelsea, I think the topic is so interesting. Cool that you got access to it. My first impression is that there are a lot of cuts in your video, especially in the beginning. It kind of distracted me.
In a nutshell: Show less of people's backs, more reactions and let us see some product.
Great story - my only two issues are with audio and framing (composition). The audio takes a little while to get used to - seems low and scratchy sometimes. Shrug. As far as the framing of some of the shots, it's a personal thing. I wasn't quite sure if you were framing them in a way that attempted to adhere to some privacy wishes (like cutting off heads) or not, but I wanted wider shots, and to see more of the people in the frames. There were a few shots where it would be half a body, or a cut off head, etc. etc - but that is just me. Looks good otherwise! - Jason
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i like it, nice work... can you bring up the levels on the natural sound (conversations etc) during the pauses in the interviews?... also, i want to see people interacting and having fun as they put on the lotions and play with the products (in a non-explicit manner)... too much footage of people walking and standing around... get to the fun part... the toys!
Hey Charles and I are in the lab working on video too. He just showed me your draft.
Hey Chelsea,
I think the topic is so interesting. Cool that you got access to it. My first impression is that there are a lot of cuts in your video, especially in the beginning. It kind of distracted me.
In a nutshell: Show less of people's backs, more reactions and let us see some product.
That's my 2 cents!
Great story - my only two issues are with audio and framing (composition). The audio takes a little while to get used to - seems low and scratchy sometimes. Shrug. As far as the framing of some of the shots, it's a personal thing. I wasn't quite sure if you were framing them in a way that attempted to adhere to some privacy wishes (like cutting off heads) or not, but I wanted wider shots, and to see more of the people in the frames. There were a few shots where it would be half a body, or a cut off head, etc. etc - but that is just me. Looks good otherwise! - Jason
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